Charlie II

Hey Carlito! After reading this piece I have to say I'm confused. It's been almost a month and nobody seems to have reviewed this despite it being one of the ...

Dear YWS, It appears that you can take the writer away from YWS but you can't take YWS away from the writer. And then, even when he's been separated from ...

Woah, hudz96, that's quite a photo. I like the general moodiness of the shot -- you caught one of those brilliant glimpses of Nature at its finest. The mixture of ...

Charlie -- The Chemist-mas Lab "Great Scott!" said Charlie. "I've done it!" The laboratory was a mess. The benches were strewn with beakers and conical flasks containing a whole spectrum ...

The banner for this is fantastic. :D I should never have doubted the chemical composition of the moon...

I'm with Cheebs -- choose *all* the options!

Review started: 26/11/11 I believe I've seen the first part/s of this before, so I'm looking forward to seeing some more. I can't promise when I'll finish this, but I'll ...

Review started: 26/11/11 I've downloaded this and will work through the manuscript as and when I can. Are there any particular parts you'd like me to look at in detail, ...

I think you're quite right, Mikko -- if the devil were like one book it would have to be by Dan Brown. Also this made me laugh a lot: Favorite ...

*knocks on wood* Thank you, Nate -- we're grateful as always.

The world seems right once more! 8) (Unless of course the Storybook setting was a month in the past in which case I'm sorry!)

I think I might actually be free for this! :D (Also what happened to the numerical date in the title? It's messing with my mind! :O )

Hello again Mr Paul! Characters Ironically, though perhaps intentionally, there doesn't seem to be anything magnificent about Humphrey Wolf Adams so far! He's got the endearing "oh dear the family ...

I guess I'll call you Stela. :wink: Characterisation You did pretty well here, I think. Your main character is a little under-developed when you compare her to Harper -- I ...

I am Charlie the Unicorn and recently had a life-changing experience on a trek to Candy Mountain. I'm hoping to publish my memoirs of the events with Pink Unicorn Publishing. ...